預(yù)約高中1對1精品課程(面授/在線),滿足學(xué)員個性化學(xué)習(xí)需求 馬上報名↓
綜合訓(xùn)練十
作文總結(jié):
例1 地震題材
根據(jù)中文大意和英文提示詞語,寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60個詞的短文。所給英文提示詞語供選用。
2008年5月12日四川汶川發(fā)生了8級地震,在這次災(zāi)難中,全國人民眾志成城、抗震救災(zāi),在災(zāi)難面前充分體現(xiàn)了互助、互愛的精神。在這次災(zāi)難中,你肯定也為災(zāi)區(qū)的人民做了一些力所能及的事情,請談?wù)勀闼龅氖虑,以及你將要做些什么,并談(wù)勀愕母邢搿?/p>
提示詞語:
raise money(捐錢),give away some books / clothes, write letters, make cards,
On May 12th. A very big and serious earthquake took place in Wenchuan. At that time, many people lost their homes and their family members.
Everyone in China did their best to help those people in need. So do I. I not only raised my pocket money, but also gave away my books to the homeless children. Besides, my classmates and I wrote letters to cheer them up. I also made cards for them to encourage the children to face the difficult bravely.
All Chinese are like our brothers and sisters, so let’s try our best to help our family members. I think it will be all right in the near future.
I did a lot of things for the people who are in trouble.
First, I raised money for them and told others to raise money with. Second, I gave away some books to them. I know the children need to study, but they lost their books. What’s more, I really want to write many letters and send them to the children who are afraid. They lost their parents, their friends and their teachers in this disaster. They need love!
Look! Our friends are crying. They need our help! Let’s do something for them. I believe we will overcome difficulties if all of us give love to those people.
例2:目前中孩子的學(xué)習(xí)生活比較緊張,適當(dāng)放松是必不可少的.就這個問題做了一次調(diào)查,結(jié)果如上.請根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文向《中孩子》報投稿.內(nèi)容包括調(diào)查的相關(guān)信息和你個人的觀點.
對象初三二班
人數(shù)60人(男:31,女:29)
常用的放松方式看電視30人,玩游戲12人,聽音樂8人,體育鍛煉5人,沒有時間放松5人
你的觀點你還有什么好的放松方法?為什么?
I am a No. 2 Middle School student. I’ve recently made a survey of the students on the ways of relaxing after school. There are 60 students in Class 2 Grade Nine. They have different ways to rest after school. Half of the students often watch TV. Twelve students like playing computer games while eight prefer listening to music. Five students think doing sports is a good way and another five are too busy to relax.
However, I have my own ways, such as watching movies, reading novels and so on. They can not only ease stress and minds but also help me learn something useful from great movies and books. Therefore, we should choose a proper way to enjoy our spare time even if we are busy every day.
例3:初三孩子洋洋打算在中考結(jié)束后利用假期學(xué)點東西,畫畫和游泳她都喜歡,拿不定主意.洋洋寫信給朋友Jack征求意見,請你以Jack的身份寫封回信,幫助洋洋作出決定.
LessonTimeCostPlace
DrawingThree times a week250 yuanFar from home
swimmingSunday afternoon350 yuanQuite near
Dear Yang Yang,
I’ m glad to receive your E-mail. I think it’s cool for you to study something you are interested in this summer vacation.
In my opinion, you should choose drawing, as it won’t cost you much. Though it’s far from home, it doesn’t matter. If you really like it, nothing will stop you. What’s more, drawing can give you a deeper understanding of beauty and culture. On the other hand, swimming is a good hobby too. But you’ll have to pay more for it. Although it’s near home, I don’t think it’s worth it. Besides, when you’re free you can go swimming with your friends who are good at it. I’m sure they all like to teach you.
Anyway, no matter what you choose, just remember to do what you really like. Best wishes to you and have a wonderful summer vacation.
Yours Sincerely Jack
例4:敘述一個人
My mother is very kind and easygoing. She helps me a lot. She takes good care of my daily life. For example, every morning, she wakes me up and cooks breakfast for me. When I’m in trouble, She always encourages me to face my difficulties and cheers up. I still remember that once I argued with my best friend and was upset. My mother talked with me the whole night and finally helped me solve the problem. With her help, I become a top student in my class. I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me. I believe she will be proud of me in the near future.
My English teacher Ms Lee is very kind and easygoing. She helps me a lot. She takes good care of us. She often helps me with my English. When I’m in trouble, she encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me advice. I still remember that once Ifailed in an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English . With her help, I made great progress in English and become interested in it. I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me. I’ll try my best to live up to her expectations.
Everyone needs help and I’ve learned a lot from it.
I was not good at math at the beginning. A few months ago, my teacher asked me to help my classmate Mike with his math. Before helping him I felt a little nervous, so I went over the textbook again and again, and did lots of exercise. To my surprise, I could even work out some difficult problems that I couldn’t understand before. With my help, Mike made great progress in math, too.
From this experience, not only I help him out of his trouble, but also I improved my own math a lot. I have realized that it is good for everyone to help others.
例5:敘述一件事:
Everyone has some unforgettable experience.
Last term my leg was badly hurt in a football match, and I had to stay in bed for two weeks. While I was worrying about school work at home, my classmate, Tom came to help me. He told me what the teacher taught in class, and helped me a lot with my math problems. I was deeply moved because he kept teaching me until I returned to school. I was glad that I caught up with my classmates.
From then on, we became best friends. I understood that a friend in need is a friend indeed. I won’t forget this unforgettable experience forever.
Everyone has some unforgettable experience. I will never forget my first volunteer work.
Last summer, our class went to a country primary school to help the students there. First, we gave away some books and school things to them. Then we talked about school life. I was quite shy before, but to my surprise, I talked with some students for almost an hour. Finally, we played games together. All of us felt happy.
By doing the volunteer work, I not only got happiness, but also become more confident. It made me understand that giving is receiving.
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