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看圖作文
同學(xué)們,看到下面的四幅圖片及相應(yīng)的報道后,你感到較擔(dān)憂的是哪兩種情形?請簡述你擔(dān)憂的理由并提出建議或希望。
要求:
、 從所給素材中任選兩種情形進行闡述,不可多選或少選。
、 條理清楚,意思連貫,語句通順,標(biāo)點正確;
、 詞數(shù) 80 ~ 100。
參考詞匯: 建議 suggest v. suggestion n.
氣體 gas n. 污染 pollution n.
THE POLLUTIONS
、 One third of the world's people don't have enough clean water.
② More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.
、 People are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises.
④ Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.
這道看圖作文題,主題和圖片連接得不是很緊密。從考查的形式上來說,雖是看圖,實質(zhì)上卻屬于提示性的作文。這個作文應(yīng)該結(jié)合個人的觀點,選擇的余地還是很大的。做這個題應(yīng)該注意幾個方面:
1、認(rèn)真讀題。注意,題目雖然給了四幅圖,但是卻只要求寫其中的兩個就行。
2、題意要求的是闡述個人的觀點-較擔(dān)憂的兩種情形。而不是對圖片進行描述。
3、結(jié)合所給的提示。提示中,對每種污染都進行了闡述,考生可以這些描述進行寫作。
4、注意字?jǐn)?shù),語法,拼寫等,避免錯誤。
下面是兩個例文,大家可以參考一下。
One possible version:
The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollution I worry about. The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, because people can't live healthily with dirty water and polluted air, nor can animals. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.
I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste gas. We'd better go on foot or by like instead of by car, because more cars mean more waste gas. We should make our world more and more beautiful.
Another possible version:
The first fact I worry about is noise pollution. People can't sleep well if there is too much noise. That's why so many people prefer to live in the countryside rather than live in the noisy city. I suggest all the factories and cars shouldn't make terrible noises. If they make terrible noise that isn't allowed, they will be fined, and we can also produce the cars which can't make terrible noise.
The other pollution is rubbish pollution. If everyone makes so much rubbish, one day we may live in a world filled with rubbish. Some people throw the waste paper about. I suggest rubbish should be put into different kinds of dustbins or paper bags
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