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2013上海中考英語作文范文

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2013年中考的英語診斷已經結束了,作文題目為 “How to protect myself”
 

  • 結合生活中的一個場景,寫如何保護我自己
    參考下列詞匯:
    calm down       ask…for help
                             prevent…from    in  danger

    作文題解析:
    這個題目延續(xù)了去年出題的方式,即給題干不給要點,但要點在題干中,并要求孩子辨認寫作要點。往往有以下幾個點容易出錯,大家看你有沒有?

    1. 過多寫具體事例,重點應該是保護自己的方式
    2. 把myself 寫成us,ourselves, 甚至himself, herself
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  • 先來先進篇,的張杰老師寫了一篇關于火災的
  • As a student, I think it important for me to protect myself from dangerous situations. I will take fires as an example. First of all, I must calm down as soon as possible, for panicking is of no help. Then, as is known to all, calling 119 immediately is the most effective way to save myself. As well as that, it is best to take the stairs instead of elevators. In conclusion, with positive attitude and sufficient preparations, I will be able to protect myself from fires.
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  • 初中英語老師"樂樂"-Demon老師貢獻了一篇關于地震的
  • Everyone in my family was awaked by the unusual shaking. The first word that came to my mind was earthquake. When I looked outside of the window, I found everyone running here and there, and I could hear the shouting from the neighbors. Despite the fact that I was in danger, I told myself to calm down and think about the ways to protect myself in an earthquake. I should get outside instead of hiding inside the building. I couldn’t take the lift but walk downstairs. No sooner had I got outside than I asked the police for help. And I should always be aware of the unexpected drop overhead. Following these ways, I managed to prevent myself from being hurt, and survived the earthquake. I believe that these are useful ways to protect myself in an earthquake.
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  • 接下來是大米老師的 :
  • A terrible fire in Jilin took many people’s lives recently and brought endless pains to a large number of families. So if I were caught in a fire, I would try my best to protect myself. First, I would stay calm. A cool head can prevent me from taking rash actions and help to pick out a right solution the first time. Then, I would call 119 with my exact location and the situation then. Most importantly, I would cover myself with wet clothes and made my way to the secure channel instead of jumping out of the windows. With above tips, I will surely be able to protect myself from fires.

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