2009上海中考英語作文題目及范文精選

　　2009上海中考英語作文題目及范文精選！2017上海中考倒計時，英語作文占英語診斷一定分值比例，評分檔之間的分差不容小覷。下文上海愛智康初中頻道搜集整理了2009上海中考英語作文題目及范文精選，供學(xué)習(xí)參考 。

　　2009上海中考英語作文題目及范文精選（點擊查看歷年上海中考英語作文題目及范文匯總）

　　2009年上海中考英語作文題:I want to do something for my school

　　以“I want to do something for my school（我想為學(xué)校做一件事）” 為題寫-篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。

　　注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。

　　孩子習(xí)作：

　　I want to make school clean. You may think it is very simple. But I don't think so. Our teacher said, "School is your home, you should keep it clean."But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make school clean every weekends next term as well. Now, do you think it is simple?

　　點評：

　　此文分三層，先提出自己的觀點，然后寫出自己怎么做的，較后寫了我可以讓我的學(xué)校變得干凈讓每個人寬恕我，結(jié)尾緊扣全文，寫出我會怎么做。

　　全文立意新穎，區(qū)別于傳統(tǒng)的作文，有自己的生活背景，寫出了從我原來是怎么做到現(xiàn)在的轉(zhuǎn)變過程，沒有重大的語法錯誤，是一篇值得參考的好文章。

　　例文：

　　My school is in the centre of the city and the air around is not fresh enough because of the heavy traffic. Our school hasn’t noticed it, so I want to plant more trees in my school to take in polluted gases. I will use my savings to buy some plants and seeds. In addition, I will call on my schoolmates to be responsible for them when I graduate from school. I hope that my school will be cleaner and prettier.

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