上海中考英語作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)2021，中考英語作文滿分技巧

如何寫好中考英語作文？閱卷老師喜歡什么樣的作文呢？結(jié)合近幾年的中考作文的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)以及閱卷經(jīng)驗(yàn)，老師特地給同學(xué)們總結(jié)了作文拿優(yōu)異的技巧，供大家參考。

 

一、結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰

 

結(jié)構(gòu)清晰這點(diǎn)真的很重要，我們都知道，閱卷老師們要在規(guī)定的時(shí)間內(nèi)批閱上千份作文，而清晰的結(jié)構(gòu)，會(huì)讓閱卷老師一目了然，自然就會(huì)喜歡你的作文。

 

什么結(jié)構(gòu)好呢？那就是三段式。

 

先進(jìn)段要開門見山，直接拿出主題。給大家舉個(gè)例子，比如，寫我的媽媽，先進(jìn)段直接就說 My mother is a worker. She is beautiful and she is a good mother. 明確自己的觀點(diǎn)。

 

第二段就要說，她為什么是一個(gè)好媽媽。1. She works hard. 2. She is very strict with me. 3. She always encourages me and help me when I am in trouble. 詳細(xì)說出媽媽的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。

 

第三段得出結(jié)論。大家可以發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，也可以提出建議和希望。如，I love my mother. I love my family！

 

二、時(shí)態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確

 

英語作文除了結(jié)構(gòu)，還有一個(gè)是閱卷老師較敏感的，那就是時(shí)態(tài)，這也是一篇作文是否得優(yōu)異的關(guān)鍵。要明確文章的時(shí)態(tài)、同時(shí)人稱要一致、數(shù)要一致、首尾要呼應(yīng)。再根據(jù)內(nèi)容要求，先確定事情是過去已經(jīng)發(fā)生還是未來即將發(fā)生，比如記敘一件事要用一般過去時(shí)；寫經(jīng)常發(fā)生的事或?qū)θ宋锏拿鑼懀�要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；對(duì)于未來的憧憬要用一般將來時(shí)；過去的事情對(duì)現(xiàn)在造成的影響或過去延續(xù)到現(xiàn)在的狀況都用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。一定不能亂用亂配。

 

三、短語運(yùn)用要靈活

 

同學(xué)們?cè)趯懽魑牡臅r(shí)候，要盡量使用有把握的詞，避免不必要的失分。當(dāng)然，定語從句、賓語從句等句型，在關(guān)鍵的時(shí)候用上一兩個(gè)，會(huì)增添你文章的文采。在英語中存在很多簡(jiǎn)單又能表達(dá)很多意思的短語。這些短語的運(yùn)用可以使作文更加原汁原味。

 

還有對(duì)關(guān)聯(lián)詞的使用，如first of all，secondly，finally，last，so that，in order that，not...but，not only...but also等。還可以使用高級(jí)點(diǎn)的如，in a word，all in all （表示總結(jié)的），but，yet，however（表示轉(zhuǎn)折）等。

 

經(jīng)驗(yàn)的閱卷老師很在意這些邏輯連接詞，因?yàn)檫@些詞體現(xiàn)了整個(gè)文章的思路。

 

四、寫全要點(diǎn)

 

近年的各地中考英語提示性作文比較多，也就是說寫作內(nèi)容幾乎都有要點(diǎn)提示，確切地說就是給出寫作提綱，通常都是3 ～ 5個(gè)提示點(diǎn)，這種作文，同學(xué)們一定記住不要逐字翻譯，但是提示點(diǎn)必須在文章中有所體現(xiàn)。文章寫得再好，如果缺少了要點(diǎn)就會(huì)扣分的。所以要點(diǎn)也就是文章的第二段內(nèi)容，同學(xué)們要把提示點(diǎn)寫全，然后圍繞提示點(diǎn)充分發(fā)揮，豐富自己所寫的內(nèi)容。

 

五、書寫要認(rèn)真

 

這一點(diǎn)同學(xué)們必須高度重視，作文的書寫一定要保持規(guī)范整潔，同一篇文章書寫規(guī)范整潔的和書寫混亂的之間可以有2到5分的差距。

 

給閱卷老師留下較深刻印象的就是你的書寫，較簡(jiǎn)單的得分點(diǎn)就是我們的認(rèn)真書寫。工整漂亮的書寫會(huì)給評(píng)卷老師留下美好的先進(jìn)印象和愉快的心情，在扣分時(shí)自然會(huì)“手下留情”。

 

大家切記不要涂改，在情況允許的前提下可以打些草稿。避免不必要的丟分。

 

漂亮的字體是可以練出來的，只要大家在心里注意了自己的書寫，都會(huì)寫得很好。

 

作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)  

 

中考作文一般從內(nèi)容、語言、組織結(jié)構(gòu)這三方面進(jìn)行評(píng)分（總分20分）：

 

（一）內(nèi)容（助力能力8）

 

7-8分：內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。

5-6分：內(nèi)容基本切題，意思大致連貫，表達(dá)基本清楚、但不夠完整。

2-4分：內(nèi)容不夠切題，意思不夠連貫，表達(dá)不夠清楚、有些離題。

0-1分：文不對(duì)題，表達(dá)不清。

 

（二）語言（助力能力8）

 

詞數(shù)：每少5個(gè)單詞扣0.5分，以此類推。只寫出個(gè)別單詞、詞不成句不給分。

拼寫：每處錯(cuò)誤扣0.5分，同一錯(cuò)誤不重復(fù)計(jì)數(shù)。

語法：每處錯(cuò)誤扣0.5分，同一語法錯(cuò)誤不重復(fù)扣分。

標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、大小寫：每?jī)商庡e(cuò)誤扣0.5分，但扣分總和不超過1分。

 

（三）組織結(jié)構(gòu)（助力能力4）

 

內(nèi)容充實(shí)，上下文連貫，用語規(guī)范，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，無語法錯(cuò)誤；詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，多見好句型和習(xí)慣表達(dá)用語者，可給3-4分。

 

內(nèi)容充實(shí)，不寫廢話，上下文連貫，用語規(guī)范，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，無或少見語法錯(cuò)誤；詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，多見好句型和習(xí)慣表達(dá)用語者，可給2分。

 

一般情況下，內(nèi)容和語言累計(jì)得分在15分以上者（含），方可得到1-2分組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。

 

內(nèi)容和語言在15分以下者，如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表達(dá)，可酌情考慮給1分組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。

 

通篇句型句式單一、詞匯貧乏者，即使無語法錯(cuò)誤，一般也不予給組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。

 

分類作文提綱  

 

一、活動(dòng)介紹類

 

首段：

 

(1) I’m pleased to know that you’re greatly interested in ... ,so I’d like to share a piece of good news that there will be a ... .Now,let me offer you some useful information.

 

(2) It’s my great honor to invite you to enter a ... .Now,let me offer you some useful information about it.

 

(3) It’s time for us to say goodbye to our school life soon.Surprisingly,there is a/an... prepared for us.Now,let me offer you some information about it.

 

主體段：

 

1.時(shí)間&地點(diǎn)：The ... will be held in Classroom 302 at 3 o’clock in the afternoon on June 8th,2019.

 

2.內(nèi)容：

 

(1)主題句：There will be various meaningful activities included in it.

 

(2)要點(diǎn):First of all，You will be invited to .../You will be given a chance to ... .which will ...

 

After that,It will be more than interesting for you to .../It will impress you a lot to ...   so that ...

 

At last,doing sth. will play an important part in ... .So ...

 

尾段：

 

That’s all.I firmly believe that if you join in it,you will ... .

 

That’s all.I sincerely hope that you can come and share the happiness/fun with us.

 

二、寫人敘事類

 

首段：

 

(1) 朋友：A friend in need is a friend indeed.I have a friend just like that who often offers me much warmth in my life. Let me introduce him to you.

 

(2) 父母：If you ask me who is the most important one to me,without doubt,the answer is my ... . Let me introduce him to you .

 

(3) 老師：In both my life and study,my ... teacher is special to me because he is not only my teacher but also my friend who has made a great difference to my character.

 

主體段：

 

1.外貌：... is very beautiful but a little fat with long hair and big eyes.

 

2.性格：...is an outgoing woman who always gets along well with people around her./ ... is very kind to others and easy to get on with./is so ready to help others that we all like to make friends with him.

 

3.愛好：She is especially good at cooking and often cooks different delicious foods for me.

 

4.事例：

 

（1）Linda is like an angel. Whenever I meet trouble, she will always be there. When I fail my test, She always encourages me to face the fact bravely and then tries to help me to check the reason why I fail. At the same time, she shares her good ways of studying with me.

 

（2）My Chinese teacher, Ms Li, not only teaches us how to learn, but also teaches us how to be a person. I remember I made a serious mistakes in Grade seven, that was to copy others’ homework. Ms Li knew that. Instead of being angry with me, she told me the importance of study and encouraged me to study hard to become a talented person in the future.

 

（3）Last term, I failed my exam. I was so that that I cried sadly in my room. When my mother came from work late, she talked with me patiently and cheered me up. That evening, when I woke up at night, my mother was still working. I was deeply moved. Then I made up my mind to study harder than before.

 

尾段：

 

As a sunshine teenager, Xiao Hui is a good example for us to learn from./I will treasure the friendship forever.  

 

Now I understand my father’s love to me. I will never forget what my father did for me and try my best to make him pleased.

 

He is an excellent teacher I will never forget and love him forever.

 

三、咨詢建議類

 

首段：

 

I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty in doing ... .Don’t worry about it!Here are some useful suggestions I ‘d like to share with you.

 

主體段：

 

1.主題句：Actually,if you are careful, you’ll find various simple ways to help you solve the problem.

 

2.要點(diǎn)：

First and foremost,It’s  adj/n. for/of sb. to do ... .So that...

In addition,you are supposed to do ... ,which can not only ... but also ...

What’s more,you had better (not) do ... ,because ...

Last but not least,I suggest you (should) do ... ,from which,you’re able to do ...

 

尾段：

 

With these suggestions carried out,I firmly believe you will improve ... a lot.

 

I sincerely hope that my suggestions can be of great help.Looking forward to your earliest reply.

 

四、觀點(diǎn)看法類

 

首段：

 

With the development of the science and technology/society,...is becoming more and more serious./the problem about ... is under a heated discussion/ ... has become a hot topic.As for that,There are different opinions among people.

 

主體段：

 

On the one hand, some people hold the idea that ... .The reasons are as follows.First, ... .Second, ... .Last, ... .

 

On the other hand,others disagree.They suppose that ... .Because ... .More importantly, ... .

 

尾段：

 

As far as I’m concerned,every coin has two sides,and ... is not a n exception.As long as we treat ... properly,it will be of great help.

 

中考作文經(jīng)典詞句  

  

一、常用的名言警句

 

1. Actions speak louder than words. 事實(shí)勝于雄辯.

2. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患難朋友才是真朋友.

3. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成.

4. All roads lead to Rome. 條條大道通羅馬.

5. Every man has his weak side. 人人都有缺點(diǎn)?

6. Failure is the mother of success. 失敗是成功之母?

7. Nothing in the world is difficult if you set your mind to it. 世上無難事,只怕有心人。

8. A life without a friend is a life without a sun. 人若無友,就如同生命中沒有太陽。

9. All things are difficult before they are easy. 萬事開頭難。

10. Always prepare for a rainy day. 未雨綢繆。

11. Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。

12. Bad news has wings. 好事不出門,壞事傳千里。

13. You have to believe in yourself. That’s the secret of success. 你必須相信自己,這是成功的關(guān)鍵。

14. Don’t judge a man by his looks. 不可以貌取人。

 

二、常用過渡語

 

1. 表起始的過渡語:first of all, to begin with, first and foremost等。

2. 表時(shí)間的過渡語:first, at first, then, later, in the end, finally, afterwards, after that, since then, for the first time, at last, as soon as, the next moment, meanwhile, later on, soon, 等。

3. 表空間的過渡語:on the right/left, to the right/left of, on one side of…on the other side of…, at the foot/top/end of, in the middle/centre of, next to, far from, in front of等.

4. 表因果的過渡語:for, since,as,because of, thus, so, as a result (of)等.

5. 表轉(zhuǎn)折的過渡語:but, yet, however, after all, in fact, while, on the contrary, instead of, although, otherwise, in spite of等。

6. 表列舉的過渡語:for example, such as, like, as follows, in other words, and so on等。

7. 表推進(jìn)的過渡語:on one hand… on the other hand…, in addition to, as well, still, also, in other words, not only…but also…, besides, in addition,furthermore, what’s more, moreover等.

8. 表總結(jié)的過渡語:in short, in a word, in general, in brief, in all, all in all,above all等.

 

三、常用句型

 

1.重點(diǎn)句型

1). It’s adj for sb to do 做…對(duì)某人來說…

2). …so … that … 如此… 以至于…   …too … to do 太… 而不能… such … that … 如此… 以至于…

3). not…until… 直到…才…

例: I didn’t go to bed until my mother came back.

4).The reason why   句子 is that   句子 … 的原因是…

The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie. ( 他生氣的原因是她對(duì)他說了謊。)

5). That is why   句子   那是…的原因

6). That is because   句子   那是因?yàn)?hellip;

7). It is said that   句子    據(jù)說…  It is reported that   句子  據(jù)報(bào)道…

8). There is no doubt that   句子    毫無疑問…

9). It goes without saying that   句子    不言而喻，毫無疑問

10). There is no need to do沒必要做…

11). There is no point in doing 做某事毫無意義

 

2. 提建議

had better (not) do 較好(不)做

It’s  adj./n. of/for sb. to do

I suggest that you (should) do  我建議你做…

be supposed to do   應(yīng)該做

If I were you, I would do…我要是你的話，我會(huì)做…

Don’t forget to do=Remember to do...

Why not do / why don’t you do…? 為什么不…

How about / what about doing  …怎么樣?

 

3. 表示喜歡和感興趣

like / love doing=enjoy doing=be fond of doing 喜歡做…

prefer to do A rather than do B 寧愿做A也不愿做B

be interested in doing = show/ take great interest in n./ doing ...  感興趣

 

4. .努力做…

try to do努力做…  try one’s best to do= do one’s best to do 竭盡全力做…

make efforts to do = make every effort to do 盡力做…

do what sb can (do ) to do 盡力做…

spare no effort to do 不遺余力的做…

do what / everything sb. can to do 盡某人全力做…

 

5. 打算做… / 計(jì)劃做…

intend / plan to do 打算做… be going to do 打算/計(jì)劃做…

decide to do 決定做… determine to do決定做…

make up one’s mind to do下定決心做…

 

6. 表示想/希望

want to do = would like to do 想做…

hope/wish to do  希望做… expect to do 期待著做…

desire to do=have a great desire to do

 

7. 只加doing作賓語的動(dòng)詞

finish / keep / practice / suggest / allow / consider / mind / miss / avoid / imagine / enjoy doing

 

固定搭配

look forward to doing 盼望做…keep on doing 堅(jiān)持做…dream of doing 夢(mèng)想做…

can’t help doing 情不自禁地做… keep / stop / prevent sb. from doing 阻止某人做…

be busy (in ) doing    be busy with   名詞    忙于做…

spend time / money (in )doing   spend time / money on   名詞    花費(fèi)時(shí)間做…

have fun / have a good time / enjoy oneself doing 玩得開心