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【突發(fā)事件問題】
突發(fā)事件問題是中考書面表達的熱點話題,從非典到雪災,從地震到甲型HINI流感病例(A/HINI flu cases),都頻頻出現(xiàn)在各地中診斷卷中,因此必須重視。但這類文章的寫作有一定的難度,掌握基本句式和寫作技巧非常必要
典型例句:
1. one +of + 形容詞更高級+ 名詞復數(shù)
One of the biggest events in China in 2008 is that the earthquake happened in WenChuan.
2. It"s our duty to do sth
It’s our duty to help them.
3. As….as possible
We shoud help them as much as possible.
4. here be…..
Here are lots of things we can do.
5. We shoud keep calm instead of being afraid.我們要保持冷靜而不能害怕。
6. make +sb+ 形容詞
It makes many people homeless.
7. too … to= so … that
They are too young to look after themselves
例文:
1、汶川大地震(黑龍江雞西)
5月12日,四川省汶川地區(qū)發(fā)生了罕見的大地震,那里的人們痛失親人和家園。全國人民眾志成城,抗震救災。作為一名中孩子,請你談談你的做法和感受。
要求:文章語言流暢,邏輯清晰,用詞準確,80—100字左右;
詞匯參考:地震earthquake,悲痛sorrow,受到感動be deeply moved,安慰comfort,重建rebuild,自愿做某事volunteer to do sth
參考范文:
On May 12th, a big earthquake happened in Wenchun, Sichuan. Many people lost their relatives and their homes. All the Chinese people feel quite sorrow.A lot of people volunteer to help them. Some people raise money for them, some people buy something for them, some people go there to comfort the sad children. Thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign friends also give them a hand.
I’m deeply moved by these people. So I’ll use my pocket money to buy some food and school things for the children there. I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.
2、雪災
去年春節(jié)期間,我國大部分地區(qū)遭受雪災,特別是南方,室?guī)资晡从觥9、鐵路、機場都被迫關閉,電網癱瘓,數(shù)百萬人不能回家過年。部分山區(qū)人民生活異常困難,在各級政府的帶領下,人民群眾、解放軍戰(zhàn)士英勇抗擊雪災,涌現(xiàn)出大批可歌可泣的英雄事跡。作為一名中孩子,你有何感想?有何打算?能不能改變這種狀態(tài)?
As we know, our country suffered heavy snow last Spring Festival. Everything was covered with heavy snow. It made the buses, trains and planes stop. Millions of people couldn"t go home. Many people suffered trouble. There was no food, water or light in some places. Our government called on people to fight against heavy snow. As a student, I think we should learn from those heroes. We must study hard at school. We should learn all kinds of nowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.
3.甲型HINI流感
從電視上看到美國正流行甲型HINI流感(A/HINI flu),部分學校停課你為你正在美國上學的筆友Mike的健康與安全擔心。請立即給他寫一封email詢問他的情況,并給他提出防護建議。
要點:
一.詢問
1.他的健康狀況;
2.他們學校有無甲型HINI流感病例(A/HINI flu cases);
3.他們是否還上學。
二.建議
1.盡量呆在家里,少去人多的地方;
2.勤洗手;講衛(wèi)生
3.多開窗,保持空氣新鮮;
4.多吃水果蔬菜。
Dear Mike,
From the TV I know many A/HINI I flu cases are reported recently in the United States and many schools are closed as a result. I’m so worried about you. Are you alright? Are there any A/HINI flu cases in your school? Do you still have to school everyday?
To stay away from the disease, you’d better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people. Wash your hands more often to keep them clean; Open the window to have more fresh air in the room; And eat more fruit and vegetable to keep yourself fit and strong.
So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease! Take care and you’ll be OK.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
4、(四川南充)
“5.12”汶川大地震后,某校將開展“人人為災區(qū)孩子獻愛心”的主題班會活動,現(xiàn)在請你以孩子會的名義寫一份倡議書,內容要點如下:1.許多孩子地震后不能上學 2.。沒有足夠的學習用品和衣物 3.每個孩子都應該有上學的權利
4.我們應該作一些力所能及的事情去幫助、他們,比如…… 5.希望他們能盡快重返校園…….
注意:1.可根據要點,適當發(fā)揮,(參考詞匯:school things, have the right to do something, as possible as one can)
2.詞數(shù):70詞左右
參考作文:
Dear students,
After the terrible earthquake, there are lots of children out of school. Some of them are even homeless.Their schools and houses have destroyed. They can just live in the open air. They don’t have enough school things or clothes .As we all know, every kid has the right to go to school, but now they are in trouble. As a Chinese, we should help them as possible as we can. We can raise some money and things for them. And we can also write to them to encourage them. I hope they will return to school as soon as possible with our help.
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