2010中考作文預測：新生事物評價

2010-06-03 15:38:28 　來源：網(wǎng)絡資源

　　【新生事物評價】

　　這是中考熱點，這類文章的特點是寫作難度大，因此需要孩子掌握方法，和基本句式，以做到診斷時心中不亂。

　　典型例句：

　　1.Computer is becoming more and more important

　　2.we should make good use of it.

　　3.It maybe get in the way of(妨礙) our study.

　　4.We can do lots of things with(有多種方法來應對/處理) it。

　　5. It makes our life more easy

　　6.Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.

　　例文

　　1、網(wǎng)上購物

　　Doing Shopping Online

　　With the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult job. Just click your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished. You needn’t step out of the room.

　　It seems easy and quick. But there’s always a trap(陷阱) online. If you are careless, it will bring you some trouble. You may find the color of the article is different from what you want, or the size is either too small or too big. If you want to be different, you"d better not buy clothes online.

　　Once you put on the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find many people wear the same clothes in the street.

　　2、關于中孩子使用手機

　　贊成意見：1.現(xiàn)在是信息社會，手機是較快的信息交流的工具之一。

　　2.應充分利用好手機。如偶遇突發(fā)事故，可立即撥打手機求助。

　　3.可在每天學習之余利用手機游戲放松一下自己。

　　4.只要正確使用好手機，緊跟時間并無過錯，追求時尚可以理解，但學習是首要任務。

　　反對意見：1.學校已提供了公共電話，因此手機并不能帶來更多的方便，而且花費較多。

　　2.若課堂接聽手機會影響上課。

　　3.孩子玩手機游戲或接發(fā)短信，將無法集中精力學習。

　　注意：1.可適當增加細節(jié)和連接詞，使文章通順連貫;開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù);2.詞數(shù)：100左右;

　　Dear Editor,

　　Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. In my opinion, …

　　…………………

　　Yours truly,

　　Wang Lin

　　參考作文：

　　Dear Editor,

　　Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. In my opinion, we can bring mobile phones to school.

　　As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information. A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information. The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, so we ought to(應該) make the best use of it. Suppose(試設想) there’s a sudden accident, it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately. There’re also some games in the mobile phone. We can relax ourselves by playing them when we’re tired of our studies. In my opinion, it’s not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way.

　　Yours truly,

　　Wang Lin

　　3、書面表達。(計10分)

　　假如你叫李平。較近，你就使用電子詞典的問題調查了各方面的意見(見下表)�，F(xiàn)在，請你根據(jù)表格中的信息用英語給某報社編輯寫一封信。

　　注意：1.信件須包括寫信原由及表格所列內容;

　　2.書信格式正確;

　　3.書寫整潔;

　　4.詞數(shù)在80個左右。

　　Dear Editor，

　　Recently(較近) I made a survey(做調查) about the use of the electronic dictionary.My classmates think that the electronic dictionary is useful，convenient and it can help to save time looking up the words.The parents also think the electronic dictionary is easy to carry and most families can afford it.But my English teacher doesn’t think we should use it，because she/he thinks its explanations for the words are too simple.I suppose the electronic dictionary will make us lazy and we shouldn’t use it.

　　Yours，

　　Li Ping

　　4.看圖作文

　　同學們，看到下面的四幅圖片及相應的報道后，你感到較擔憂的是哪兩種情形?請簡述你擔憂的理由并提出建議或希望。

　　要求：⒈ 從所給素材中任選兩種情形進行闡述，不可多選或少選。

　�、� 條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，標點正確;

　�、� 詞數(shù) 80 ～ 100。

　　參考詞匯：建議 suggest v. suggestion n. 氣體 gas n.　污染 pollution n.

　　THE POLLUTIONS

　�、� One third of the world"s people don"t have enough clean water.

　�、� More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

　�、� People are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises.

　�、� Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.

　　這道看圖作文題，主題和圖片連接得不是很緊密。從考查的形式上來說，雖是看圖，實質上卻屬于提示性的作文。這個作文應該結合個人的觀點，選擇的余地還是很大的。做這個題應該注意幾個方面：

　　1、認真讀題。注意，題目雖然給了四幅圖，但是卻只要求寫其中的兩個就行。

　　2、題意要求的是闡述個人的觀點-較擔憂的兩種情形。而不是對圖片進行描述。

　　3、結合所給的提示。提示中，對每種污染都進行了闡述，考生可以這些描述進行寫作。

　　4、注意字數(shù)，語法，拼寫等，避免錯誤。

　　下面是兩個例文，大家可以參考一下。

　　范文：觀點一

　　The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollution I worry about. The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, because people can"t live healthily with dirty water and polluted air, nor can animals. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

　　I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste gas. We"d better go on foot or by like instead of by car, because more cars mean more waste gas. We should make our world more and more beautiful.

　　范文：觀點二

　　The first fact I worry about is noise pollution. People can"t sleep well if there is too much noise. That"s why so many people prefer to live in the countryside rather than live in the noisy city. I suggest all the factories and cars shouldn"t make terrible noises. If they make terrible noise that isn"t allowed, they will be fined, and we can also produce the cars which can"t make terrible noise.

　　The other pollution is rubbish pollution. If everyone makes so much rubbish, one day we may live in a world filled with rubbish. Some people throw the waste paper about. I suggest rubbish should be put into different kinds of dustbins or paper bags.