2017中考北京英語作文

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2017中考北京英語作文。作文是英語診斷的一個內(nèi)容，相比用母語來寫作文，用英文寫作文更考驗孩子的能力。在一定程度上這不僅是在考察孩子英語知識的掌握程度，跟語文學(xué)科的學(xué)習(xí)也有很大關(guān)系。小編將2017年英語作文真題分享給大家，列舉助力能力作文的奪分亮點，從立意、題目、開篇、結(jié)構(gòu)、首尾、語言、文體等方面進(jìn)行歸納總結(jié)，增強2020中考生的實戰(zhàn)性。下面，小編為大家?guī)?/span>2017中考北京英語作文的相關(guān)內(nèi)容，供大家參考。

2017中考北京英語作文　　

　　真題在線

　　文段表達(dá)

　　題目①

　　假如你是李華，正在美國參加一個交換生項目。今天下午你應(yīng)邀和朋友Jim 一家外出，請用英語給接待家庭的媽媽Mrs. Smith 寫一個留言條，告訴她你們要去哪里，去做什么，以及你回家的時間和方式。

　　提示詞語：park, movie theater, go boating, watch a movie

　　提示問題：Where are you going?

　　What are you going to do?

　　When and how will you get home?

　　Dear Mrs. Smith,

　　My friend Jim asks me to go out with his family this afternoon.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　題目②

　　寬容是一種美德。人與人之間難免會有磕磕絆絆。面對矛盾，多一份包容和諒解，生活就會多一縷陽光。

　　某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以"包容、諒解"為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心阍徦说囊淮谓?jīng)歷，主要內(nèi)容包括：你們之間發(fā)生了什么，你為什么原諒對方，以及原諒對方之后的感受。

　　提示詞語：hurt, realize, forgive(原諒), happy

　　提示問題：What happened between you and him/her?

　　Why did you decide to forgive him/her?

　　How did you feel after forgiving him/her?

　　I still remember what happened between

　　功課解析

　　2017中考北京英語作文與2016年相比，在診斷形式上沒有什么特殊的變化，還是二選一，孩子選擇其中一題完成任務(wù)的診斷形式。都是圍繞著一個主題，根據(jù)題目提供的信息，提示詞和兩個問句進(jìn)行內(nèi)容的寫作。話題仍貼近孩子的實際生活，讓孩子有話可說。先進(jìn)個題目更強調(diào)對語言的實際應(yīng)用能力;第二個話題相對較難，考查孩子的思想深度和語言能力，突出社會主義核心價值觀。

　　題目①

　　Dear Mrs. Smith,

　　My friend Jim asks me to go out with his family this afternoon. I am writing to tell you that we will meet in the park. Then we will go to the movie theater to watch a movie. Finally, we are going to go boating in the lake. Don’t worry about me. We will be back at 6:00 p.m. Jim’s father will send me home by taxi. I am sure to have a lot of fun. Waiting for my back.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【老師點評】

　　這是一篇應(yīng)用文，寫一篇留言條。也是一篇材料作文，給出了一些材料，并給出了一些提示單詞和提示問題。我們要根據(jù)提示材料和問題(Where are you going?What are you going to do?When and how will you get home?)用正確的英語把要點表達(dá)出來，用上所給單詞，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般將來時來寫。首先，回答 “Where are you going?” 要明確寫出外出的地點。然后回答“What are you going to do?”具體寫出我們到達(dá)外出地之后所進(jìn)行的活動。接著回答“When and how will you get home?”需要寫出回家的方式和到家的時間。較后，寫希望家里的媽媽不要為我擔(dān)心。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意敘述的順序，要符合邏輯關(guān)系。

　　【寫作亮點】

　　這篇短文語句通順，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,特別適用了表示先后順序的詞Then，F(xiàn)inally,使表達(dá)具有條里性，句式Don’t worry about me. .I am sure to等的使用，更增加了文章的色彩，此文表達(dá)具有邏輯性,，有條理。

　　題目②

　　I still remember what happened between me and Tom. Yesterday, I had a fight with my friend Tom. He took away my pen without my agreement. My father bought it for me last year, and I like it very much. His behavior hurt me. I was very angry. For his sorry, he wrote a card:"Sorry, please forgive me". He felt ashamed for what he did. At last I realized that I was too stingy. I choose to forgive him. He was very happy for my forgiveness. I was very happy, too. Through this matter, we became good friends.

　　As the Chinese old saying goes"To err is human". In our whole long life, I believe, nobody can make no mistakes. Children may broke bowls, students may cheat or do something against the teacher, and grown-ups may do something wrong on their work or even something against the law. Keeping something unpleasant in mind does no good to us. Letting the unhappy matters go brings happiness and pleasure back to our life.

　　【老師點評】

　　本文屬于話題類作文，話題是“包容、諒解”。主要關(guān)于個人經(jīng)歷的，需要考生寫出諒解他人的經(jīng)歷，具體內(nèi)容圍繞以下三個方面：1.你們之間發(fā)生了什么事?2.你為什么決定原諒他(她)?3.談?wù)勀阍徦?她)之后的感受。仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點�？忌枰獜娜齻€方面作答，指出原諒對方的一件事情，原諒的原因以及原諒之后的感受。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

　　【亮點說明】

　　這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點;語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫。首先指出原諒的對象，“I still remember what happened between me and Tom.”

　　接著詳細(xì)描述發(fā)生的事情，先指出矛盾點，“Yesterday ,I had a fight with my friend Tom. He took away my pen without my agreement…” 然后，描述轉(zhuǎn)折點，是他認(rèn)識了錯誤，給我道歉For his sorry, he wrote a card:” Sorry, please forgive me”. He felt ashamed for what he do. 事情發(fā)展的較后，我原諒了朋友并擁抱和好，“I choose to forgive him. He was very happy for my forgiveness. I was very happy, too. Through this matter, we became good friends..”較后描述自己的感悟As the Chinese old saying … Letting the unhappy matters go brings happiness and pleasure back to our life.

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