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北京中考英語作文輔導。很多同學在寫中考作文時,看到題目后,不知該如何下手;雖然題目不難,都是我們在生活中很常見的話題,但是真要用自己的話寫出來,仍需要下一番苦功夫。下面,小編為大家?guī)?/span>北京中考英語作文輔導的相關內(nèi)容,供大家參考。

北京中考英語作文輔導

  如何寫好中考作文

  那么,如何寫好中考作文?閱卷老師喜歡什么樣的作文呢?

  結(jié)合近幾年的中考作文的評分標準以及閱卷經(jīng)驗,給同學們總結(jié)了作文拿優(yōu)異的技巧,供大家參考。

  一、結(jié)構要清晰

  結(jié)構清晰這點真的很重要,我們都知道,閱卷老師們要在規(guī)定的時間內(nèi)批閱上千份作文,而清晰的結(jié)構,會讓閱卷老師一目了然,自然就會喜歡你的作文。

  什么結(jié)構好呢?那就是三段式。

  先進段要開門見山,直接拿出主題。給大家舉個例子,比如,寫我的媽媽,先進段直接就說 My mother is a worker. She is beautiful and she is a good mother. 明確自己的觀點。

  第二段就要說,她為什么是一個好媽媽。1. She works hard. 2. She is very strict with me. 3. She always encourages me and help me when I am in trouble. 詳細說出媽媽的優(yōu)點。

  第三段得出結(jié)論。大家可以發(fā)表自己的觀點,也可以提出建議和希望。如,I love my mother. I love my family!

  二、時態(tài)要準確

  英語作文除了結(jié)構,還有一個是閱卷老師較敏感的,那就是時態(tài),這也是一篇作文是否得優(yōu)異的關鍵。要明確文章的時態(tài)、同時人稱要一致、數(shù)要一致、首尾要呼應。再根據(jù)內(nèi)容要求,現(xiàn)確定事情是過去已經(jīng)發(fā)生還是未來即將發(fā)生,比如記敘一件事要用一般過去時;寫經(jīng)常發(fā)生的事或?qū)θ宋锏拿鑼,要用一般現(xiàn)在時;對于未來的憧憬要用一般將來時;過去的事情對現(xiàn)在造成的影響或過去延續(xù)到現(xiàn)在的狀況都用現(xiàn)在完成時。一定不能亂用亂配。

  三、短語運用要靈活

  同學們在寫作文的時候,要盡量使用有把握的詞,避免不必要的失分。當然,定語從句、賓語從句等句型,在關鍵的時候用上一兩個,會增添你文章的文采。在英語中存在很多簡單又能表達很多意思的短語。這些短語的運用可以使作文更加原汁原味。

  還有對關聯(lián)詞的使用,如first of all,secondly,finally,last,so that,in order that,not...but,not only...but also等。還可以使用高級點的如,in a word,all in all (表示總結(jié)的),but,yet,however(表示轉(zhuǎn)折)等。

  經(jīng)驗的閱卷老師很在意這些邏輯連接詞,因為這些詞體現(xiàn)了整個文章的思路。

  四、北京中考英語作文輔導 寫全要點

  近年的各地中考英語提示性作文比較多,也就是說寫作內(nèi)容幾乎都有要點提示,確切地說就是給出寫作提綱,通常都是3 ~ 5個提示點,這種作文,同學們一定記住不要逐字翻譯,但是提示點必須在文章中有所體現(xiàn)。文章寫得再好,如果缺少了要點就會扣分的。所以要點也就是文章的第二段內(nèi)容,同學們要把提示點寫全,然后圍繞提示點充分發(fā)揮,豐富自己所寫的內(nèi)容。

  五、書寫要認真

  這一點同學們必須高度重視,作文的書寫一定要保持規(guī)范整潔,同一篇文章書寫規(guī)范整潔的和書寫混亂的之間可以有2到5分的差距。

  給閱卷老師留下較深刻印象的就是你的書寫,較簡單的得分點就是我們的認真書寫。工整漂亮的書寫會給評卷老師留下美好的先進印象和愉快的心情,在扣分時自然會“手下留情”。

  大家切記不要涂改,在情況允許的前提下可以打些草稿。避免不必要的丟分。

  漂亮的字體是可以練出來的,只要大家在心里注意了自己的書寫,都會寫得很好。

  作文評分標準

  中考作文一般從內(nèi)容、語言、組織結(jié)構這三方面進行評分(總分20分):

  (一)內(nèi)容(助力能力8)

  7-8分:內(nèi)容切題,意思連貫,表達清楚、完整。

  5-6分:內(nèi)容基本切題,意思大致連貫,表達基本清楚、但不夠完整。

  2-4分:內(nèi)容不夠切題,意思不夠連貫,表達不夠清楚、有些離題。

  0-1分:文不對題,表達不清。

  (二)語言(助力能力8)

  詞數(shù):每少5個單詞扣0.5分,以此類推。只寫出個別單詞、詞不成句不給分。

  拼寫:每處錯誤扣0.5分,同一錯誤不重復計數(shù)。

  語法:每處錯誤扣0.5分,同一語法錯誤不重復扣分。

  標點符號、大小寫:每兩處錯誤扣0.5分,但扣分總和不超過1分。

  (三)組織結(jié)構(助力能力4)

  內(nèi)容充實,上下文連貫,用語規(guī)范,表達準確,無語法錯誤;詞匯和句型句式運用恰當,多見好句型和習慣表達用語者,可給3-4分。

  內(nèi)容充實,不寫廢話,上下文連貫,用語規(guī)范,表達準確,無或少見語法錯誤;詞匯和句型句式運用恰當,多見好句型和習慣表達用語者,可給2分。

  一般情況下,內(nèi)容和語言累計得分在15分以上者(含),方可得到1-2分組織結(jié)構分。

  內(nèi)容和語言在15分以下者,如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表達,可酌情考慮給1分組織結(jié)構分。

  通篇句型句式單一、詞匯貧乏者,即使無語法錯誤,一般也不予給組織結(jié)構分。

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2019年《診斷說明》在內(nèi)容修訂過程中強調(diào)基礎。例如,單項填空考查的都是考生所熟悉的基礎語法點;完形填空著眼于實詞和高頻詞考查;閱讀理解試題中,獲取具體信息和簡單推斷這兩項強調(diào)基礎的試題占了很大比例。
 
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  北京中考英語作文輔導 分類作文提綱

  一、活動介紹類

  首段:

  (1) I’m pleased to know that you’re greatly interested in ... ,so I’d like to share a piece of good news that there will be a ... .Now,let me offer you some useful information.

  (2) It’s my great honor to invite you to enter a ... .Now,let me offer you some useful information about it.

  (3) It’s time for us to say goodbye to our school life soon.Surprisingly,there is a/an... prepared for us.Now,let me offer you some information about it.

  主體段:

  1.時間&地點:The ... will be held in Classroom 302 at 3 o’clock in the afternoon on June 8th,2019.

  2.內(nèi)容:

  (1)主題句:There will be various meaningful activities included in it.

  (2)要點:First of all,You will be invited to .../You will be given a chance to ... .which will ...

  After that,It will be more than interesting for you to .../It will impress you a lot to ... so that ...

  At last,doing sth. will play an important part in ... .So ...

  尾段:

  That’s all.I firmly believe that if you join in it,you will ... .

  That’s all.I sincerely hope that you can come and share the happiness/fun with us.

  二、寫人敘事類

  首段:

  (1) 朋友:A friend in need is a friend indeed.I have a friend just like that who often offers me much warmth in my life. Let me introduce him to you.

  (2) 父母:If you ask me who is the most important one to me,without doubt,the answer is my ... . Let me introduce him to you .

  (3) 老師:In both my life and study,my ... teacher is special to me because he is not only my teacher but also my friend who has made a great difference to my character.

  主體段:

  1.外貌:... is very beautiful but a little fat with long hair and big eyes.

  2.性格:...is an outgoing woman who always gets along well with people around her./ ... is very kind to others and easy to get on with./is so ready to help others that we all like to make friends with him.

  3.愛好:She is especially good at cooking and often cooks different delicious foods for me.

  4.事例:

  (1)Linda is like an angel. Whenever I meet trouble, she will always be there. When I fail my test, She always encourages me to face the fact bravely and then tries to help me to check the reason why I fail. At the same time, she shares her good ways of studying with me.

  (2)My Chinese teacher, Ms Li, not only teaches us how to learn, but also teaches us how to be a person. I remember I made a serious mistakes in Grade seven, that was to copy others’ homework. Ms Li knew that. Instead of being angry with me, she told me the importance of study and encouraged me to study hard to become a talented person in the future.

  (3)Last term, I failed my exam. I was so that that I cried sadly in my room. When my mother came from work late, she talked with me patiently and cheered me up. That evening, when I woke up at night, my mother was still working. I was deeply moved. Then I made up my mind to study harder than before.

  尾段:

  As a sunshine teenager, Xiao Hui is a good example for us to learn from./I will treasure the friendship forever.

  Now I understand my father’s love to me. I will never forget what my father did for me and try my best to make him pleased.

  He is an excellent teacher I will never forget and love him forever.

  三、北京中考英語作文輔導 咨詢建議類

  首段:

  I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty in doing ... .Don’t worry about it!Here are some useful suggestions I ‘d like to share with you.

  主體段:

  1.主題句:Actually,if you are careful, you’ll find various simple ways to help you solve the problem.

  2.要點:

  First and foremost,It’s +adj/n.+for/of sb. to do ... .So that...

  In addition,you are supposed to do ... ,which can not only ... but also ...

  What’s more,you had better (not) do ... ,because ...

  Last but not least,I suggest you (should) do ... ,from which,you’re able to do ...

  尾段:

  With these suggestions carried out,I firmly believe you will improve ... a lot.

  I sincerely hope that my suggestions can be of great help.Looking forward to your earliest reply.

  四、觀點看法類

  首段:

  With the development of the science and technology/society,...is becoming more and more serious./the problem about ... is under a heated discussion/ ... has become a hot topic.As for that,There are different opinions among people.

  主體段:

  On the one hand, some people hold the idea that ... .The reasons are as follows.First, ... .Second, ... .Last, ... .

  On the other hand,others disagree.They suppose that ... .Because ... .More importantly, ... .

  尾段:

  As far as I’m concerned,every coin has two sides,and ... is not a n exception.As long as we treat ... properly,it will be of great help.

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