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小學英語寫作要領:詞語簡化技巧

2010-06-22 09:53:07  來源:網絡資源

  策略之一:用介詞短語替代從句。


  例:


  原句: While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning.


  修改后: During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.


  原句: When you come to the second traffic light, turn right.


  修改后: At the second traffic light turn left.


  策略之二:刪除諸如"who is”或"that is"之類的關系代詞,變從句為短語。


  例:


  原句:The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages.


  修改后:The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages.


  注:把句中的”three parts”改用形容詞來表達,節(jié)省了四個不必要的單詞”which is written in”。我們經常可以將關系代詞如”that”去掉,這只會引起較少的變動。


  策略之三:剔除你不需要的單詞。


  "Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call. "


  寫完這樣的句子后,你自己再讀一遍,挑出單詞”joint”和”telephone”,注意刪去不必要的詞。

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